Sunday, January 17, 2010

Story about a whore

HER NAME IS CRYSTAL
BILL MASERTON(mid 20's) is a simple lonely man working as a welder in Long Beach California decides to pick up a pretty little prostitute one night. This is Bill's first sexual experience, he is a bit nervous and confused by it all. So he picks up CRYSTAL, the first thing he does is asks her name. Which throws her off because a question like that has never been asked. So Bill takes Crystal to his house, again Crystal is confused by the nature of all of it but she goes along with it. Bill is awkward about the whole thing, after sex he asks her if she needs a ride home. Again a stupid question to ask a prostitute. But as it turns out Crystal lives in a motel. Bill finds this absurd and offers to share his house with her. Crystal is grateful but she finds it too risky.The next day Bill goes to work. He discusses what he did last night to his only friend DAVIE. Davie knows the girl, apparently she is only 17. Bill stops in his tracks. He had sex with someone underaged in a city with some of the harshest sex offender laws out there. Bill immediately feels guilty, but then he thinks about it. He kind of wants to save this girl, he doesn't think it's right that shes doing this.After work Bill scouts down Crystal. He finds her roaming the beach looking for work. Bill manages to get her into his car by offering to have sex with her. He lectures her and finds out that she is only doing this for school. Bill finds this absolutely absurd. He takes her home, and offers her his spare room. Crystal accepts, saying that she's never been treated this way. And despite it being odd, she needs a place to stay.Bill thinks this girl could do more with her life. So he starts looking for a job for her while shes out on the streets. While doing so he meets her pimp, MCPHERSON, the biggest baddest pimp in all of Los Angeles County. Crystal told McPherson that she moved into some guys house. And he wanted to make sure Bill isn't some psycho who would try and kill her in the future. In bills state of nervousness, he proclaims that he is her uncle and he is going to make sure she has someone where to live from now on. McPherson falls for it, but if anything goes down then McPherson is going to have to slap a bitch and kill a Welder.That night is game night, Bill invites Davie over and they play Monopoly together. Crystal comes home after getting abused, in tears she runs to her room and proclaims that she was nearly beaten before McPherson intervened. Bill shows sympathy for her and once again reminds her that she is got to get out of the business. Crystal proclaims the fact that she knows she needs to get out. But she can't until she gets enough money for school. Bill understands to a degree, and to cheer her up she is invited to the game of Monopoly. As it turns out Crystal is pretty smart and charming. And Bill is sort of attracted to her.The next day Bill starts to spread the word about Crystal to his co-workers. Once again we find that he is pretty awkward and nobody really enjoys his company because of that. But he gets Crystal some customers, and she goes to town. She starts doing it at his house, which makes things awkward since Bill is starting to grow to enjoy her company. Meanwhile McPherson starts to grow concern. Her numbers have grown, but he thinks that Bill is going to try and take her away from him. And Crystal has the potential to be a bottom bitch(One who gets the more expensive cliental.) He also has plans for expanding into the escort business and into the call service. Crystal would excel at both.One day Bill invites her to do some normal people stuff. They go clothes shopping. They check out schools. As it turns out she wants to be a veterinarian. And with the prostitution gig she has managed to save up enough for 2 years of tuition. And she was home schooled and graduated when she was 15. But she didn't like her mom at all and always wanted to explore her sexuality, especially after being sheltered most of her life. So she met McPherson at a party, and one thing led to another. Bill begins to grow more and more attracted to her, since his story is sort of similiar. He was a really stupid kid through school. His father stopped talking to him at a young age because he didn't want to become a football player, and to his father football was everything. And his mother died early in his life. Bill never had very many friends, except for Davie. And he never had a girl in his life. While shopping Bill holds her hand, Crystal gets butterflies, and gets sort of nervous and sways away from the idea. The next night she leaves Bill in the night. She goes to work on the street. Bill wakes up to find that she has gone. He goes looking around to find out she isn't working the streets anymore. Bill decides to give up. He goes home for game night with Davie. He isn't happy, and Davie is kind of disappointed about him falling for a 17 year old prostitute. Bill doesn't care about her age, it was irrelevant. He just wants her to be safe.The next day Davie comes to bill with an add he found at a porn shop for an Escort service. Crystals name is on it. Bill schedules an appointment, and heads off to get ready. He tidies himself off, gives himself a shave. And gets a tuxedo. He buys a new(ish) car to impress her. He shows up to pick Crystal, and she says she can't be around him. She needs to continue working if she ever wants to go to school. Bill says he has the money, and he can do it. Then she brings up McPherson who doesn't want his most prized woman leaving the business. Bill gets an idea. He marches up to McPherson's pad and proclaims his love for that 17 year old prostitute. McPherson laughs in his face, nobody should fall in love with a prostitute, there soulless woman used for pleasuring men. Crystal hears this, she has heard it before. But this time, it has affected her, probably because Bill thinks otherwise of her. Crystal leaves the game herself, McPherson threatens her but Bill steps in and knocks him out. McPherson's men surround Bill. But Bill's noble action to hit McPherson changes his mind. McPherson proclaims that any man who's willing to love a Prostitute should do it anyway. He will find a new bitch, one that isn't of legal age. While Bill and Crystal leave she tells her that she is 18 in two weeks. They both smile and share there first one screen kiss.Two weeks later Davie, Crystal, Bill, and Crystals mother are having supper at a fancy restaurant. Crystal will be attending school soon, and she breaks down her relationship to her mom. Despite it all being rather crude and over the top she understands. And she is just happy that her daughter is making something of herself. Bill however, is just happy to have someone to call his own. And Davie brings out the monopoly later that night.

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